New Poem

[WolfOfOdin]

Big Fire


People are simple things, you see.,

Put the words in the right combination,
Achieve total mental domination,
Soon you'll have control over all the nation,
Drown them in the blood of their station,
Just to prolong your subjugation.

Because I can make them dance with a word or two,
And I can make them die without feeling it, or seeing it.
And I can bring them back to life with a word or two
And I can make them scream without feeling it, or seeing it.

But what happens when they rise and attack?
What happens when they beat you beack?
What happens when your power starts to crack?

I'll stand on my tower,
My words are noble
My cause is pure
My strength is endless
My power secure.

Because I can make you dance with a word or two
And I can kill you all with out seeing it, or feeling it
And I can bring you back to life with a word or two
And I can make you scream without seeing it, or feeling it

Because I can end them all in a firestorm
And I can rise again in a different form
Because I can end it all in a firestorm

I can end it all in a firestorm!

I'll end you all in a firestorm.

 

[Null]

This isn't good.

When you write a poem, ask yourself, "Could this be a Linkin Park song?"

If the answer is yes, throw it away and start over again.

 

[Dave]

I like Linkin Park. And this is a cool poem.

Hater.

 

[Silver Jelly]

It's cool, but I do see how it could work as a song! Maybe some of our music inclined forumites may like to make a musicalization of it?

 

[Null]

I like Linkin Park. And this is a cool poem.

Hater.

I'm just judging it by the poetry I usually read, the pieces I've done at public readings, and the ones I've had published.

It might work as a semi-punk song, but as a poem itself, I'm not feeling it.