Okay guys, I know we have the comics forum for this stuff but I'm creating this thread to get opinions/tips/crits on my front page comic from the artistic community of the forums. This includes the writers! I'm the first to admit that my writing skills may lack and aren't suffecient enough to go with the ideas in my head.
I know its kinda messy at the moment but I'm still trying to figure out lay out and hot to do good word bubbles. I think the latsest page show a marked improvement in panel lay out!
Any ways, here are the first four pages.
The first few pages were done on 8x10 sheets of paper while the last one was done on a 11x17. I think this makes a big difference in giving me a lot more room to work with.
So, have it!
I know its kinda messy at the moment but I'm still trying to figure out lay out and hot to do good word bubbles. I think the latsest page show a marked improvement in panel lay out!
Any ways, here are the first four pages.
The first few pages were done on 8x10 sheets of paper while the last one was done on a 11x17. I think this makes a big difference in giving me a lot more room to work with.
So, have it!