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I'm only posting one page - just one page - from a huge, new, super-secret project I'm working on. I just want some feedback on some of the choices I made, such as the way the sky was done, or the font size. (I made it large for a specific reason, but does it overwhelm the panels?)

Is it a remake of the awesome cartoon 'Two Stupid Dogs'?

Wahad said:

Is it a remake of the awesome cartoon 'Two Stupid Dogs'?

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No - the only thing similar is the basic head shape of Zach (gray dog) - other than that, they're original characters - and they're much smarter than the 2SDs.

Zappit said:

Wahad said:

Is it a remake of the awesome cartoon 'Two Stupid Dogs'?

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No - the only thing similar is the basic head shape of Zach (gray dog) - other than that, they're original characters - and they're much smarter than the 2SDs.

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But it was so awesome!

Oh well. It looks nice, anyway. Font's readable, details are good, could use a bit of shadow maybe but it works without it anyway.

The dog house has a little of a perspective issue, but other than that, it's a good strip! Shadows would add nicely to the overall effect, but it's up to you and your style.

I don't like the sky. It feels too busy. I think some clearly defined clouds would fit better.

Gruebeard said:

I don't like the sky. It feels too busy. I think some clearly defined clouds would fit better.

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This. Plain old drawn in, cartoony clouds would be fine.